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Bodies in Motion
I”m in final revisions. I”m streamlining story until it”s great and clear and right and awesome. These types of tweaks are welcome; the “land ho!” of a long sail ”cross the seas.
And, although I am not yet done, I have gotten some final feedback from other professionals:
“Very strong narrative throughline.”
“It reads fast, which is surprising and exciting for an epic.”
“I didn”t want to put it down.”
“I really like your main character.”
“This ending moment is strong”very nice wrap-up.”
“I have to admit you got me. I want to be one of these characters.”
The temperature”s like second skin, the waves are rolling and the water is lit with your reflection”
Nowcruisethatshitonin.
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