| Entry: Caliber |  | = Official Comment |
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| From Jan |
That's a great beginning  . Suspense is rising ... |
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From Curtis M Sawyer
Website: http://ussexcalibur.blogspot.com |
| ...there is no future. There is no past. I live this moment as my last! |
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From Curtis M Sawyer
Website: http://ussexcalibur.blogspot.com |
| Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other road... no other way. No day but today... |
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| From Q |
| Excellent piece. Felt like I was standing there, too.... with the stomach tumbling. |
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From Sean Stubblefield
Website: http://www.geocities.com/exastra/home.htm |
whew. i got chills. i've totally been there. in my life, and again, just then, in your words. "I'm a bold girl". "If you’re so bold, then why are you so scared?"
i love those lines. so potent, poignant, prominent.
of course, we press the buzzer. the story demands it.
there, the future awaits the daring (wo)man... and yet waits for no (wo)man. |
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From Dave Grant
Website: http://www.greatestblogeverwritten.blogspot.com/ |
I'll take the liberty of advancing the story:
J.Sto vs. The Buzzer
Stover: If you're so bold, then why are you so scared?
The Buzzer: You're scared because you fear failu....
[SUPER STEALTH NINJA KICK!]
[BUZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!]
Stover: Undeniable future victory, fool. Face!
At least....that's how I like to think it went down... |
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| From Q |
| Did you consider a Doorbell Dixie? |
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| From Anonymous |
| Got Aidmheil? Better believe it! |
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| From EM |
I'm wise to you, Stover. Through the simple process of elimination, I submit...
TSL - a Spike Lee joint. |
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| From Stef |
| I love Curtis quoting RENT!! |
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